Monday, December 22, 2014

~ ~ ~ The Strangers ~ ~ ~
Dedicated to Gian Carlo Menotti

Small in stature with a withered leg
The little boy lived meagerly in pain.
His mother with fierce tenderness adored him,
Yet grieved she hadn’t very much to give, ––
Or so she thought, –– but she was wrong.
She’d given him her love. It was enough
To give the boy a sense of joy in wonder,
An open-hearted eagerness to share, 
And better yet, desire for adventure.

The strangers came the night that eerie light
Gave the sky queer brightness like the day,
Yet cool like polished silver tinged with blue ––
Unearthly, strange, yet oddly comforting.
Splendid they were in richly woven garb ––
Material shot through with gold –– imposing ––
Three men, one tall and thin, one black, one rounded ––
Bearded, turbaned, redolent of musk.
Each with a casket carven and bejewelled.

The house they stood before –– only a hut ––
A place of meager hospitality
At best –– yet there they knocked, and asked for lodging. 
The mother, when she saw them, was aghast.
To her the strangers might as well have been
Members of a species not her own.
Dumbfounded, she could barely find her voice.
The little boy felt no constraint, however.
So powerful was his curiosity

He took his crutch and hobbled to the door.
The tall thin man looked down at him and smiled
More with his eyes than with his lips, which were
Covered largely by his great mustache.
“It’s quite all right, dear mother,” cried the lad.
“Can’t you see how tired they must be?
“Pray come in, good sirs, and warm yourselves.
“We haven’t much to give you, only porridge,
“And just the floor to sleep on, but it’s clean.”

The mother, anxious, found her voice at last.
“Please forgive my boy, he is so young.”
“Indeed,” the round one nodded, “but so kind,
“I see you’ve taught him very well, indeed.”
The black man added in a high-pitched voice,
“We’re glad to see he has no fear of us,
“We’re much in need of lodging for the night.”
“Of course,” the woman said,” please do come in,
“I’ll add a few more sticks to aid the fire.”

Outside, the camel bells then softly jingling
Accompanied the crackling of the blaze.
The splendor of the visitors’ attire,
Their richly carven, jewel-studded boxes
Aroused the woman’s curiosity.
“Those boxes must be filled with gold,” she thought,
Enviously with longing we must add,
For though she loved her crippled little boy
Finding ways to care for him was hard.

“I wonder if they know what it is like, 
For poor folk such as we?” in bitterness
She asked herself. The caskets looked so tempting.
Surely if she softly crept toward one ––
And maybe took a coin –– they’d never know ––
They’d be asleep, and her need was so great.
But suddenly the brightness from outside
Entering through the window stayed her hand.
The tall one stirred, as if he’d guessed her thoughts.

“We shall not leave you empty-handed, woman,
“‘Twould not be right not to return your kindness,
“But we would like the boy to come with us,
“For we are on our way to Bethlehem
“To pay homage to a Child soon to be born,
“For he will be the King of Kings, it’s said ––
“A Child whom we are told could save the world.
“‘Tis possible this Child might heal the boy,
“And then we could return him to you whole.”

The mother was afraid, and filled with doubt,
But then the little boy who’d heard it all,
Hobbled toward the woman with great speed,
And pleaded with her please to let him go.
He knew these regal strangers meant no harm,
And in his innocence believed their tale.
And in the way of children saw no reason
Why his mother should have any doubt
That at its worst he had nothing to lose.

Dawn arrived and spread dark purple light 
Across the vast expanse of rippled sand
Warming gradually as purple turned
To violet, then magenta, then to crimson, 
And on to glowing rose decked out in gold.
The camels woke, the jingling of the bells 
Was heard again. The mother stirred the pot
Silently as her guests prepared to leave.
After they had eaten, the black man

Removed a ruby ring from his dark hand,
And solemnly presented it to her
“A token of our gratitude,” he said.
The round man looked bemused, then gently asked,
“The boy, good woman, may he come with us?”
“We’ll keep him safe,” the tall one promised her
A kindly twinkle in his eye transformed
His long and bony countenance which had
Before appeared judgmental and austere.

She then saw what the boy had seen at first,
And this dissolved her lingering doubts at last.
The little fellow fairly leapt for joy,
Which almost made him fall, but then the hands
Of each of his new friends reached out to help
And kept him upright feeling confident ––
As though the whole world now was on his side.
The mother wiped away her tears, and kissed him.
Looking at the men beseechingly, 
But dared not ask the question all three knew 
Was on her lips, and so they kindly answered. 
“Have no fear, dear soul, we shall return.
“Our hope is that this boy will then be healed,”
The round man said. The others simply nodded.
She had no idea why, but she believed them,
And waved her son goodbye almost with joy
As the strange men put her boy atop a camel,
Then started on the road to Bethlehem. 



  1. Finally! I've found time to read this "tribute to" Amahl and the Night Visitors, the first opera which I ever saw performed live.

    Well done, FT!

    PS: I can't believe that nobody else has commented here.

  2. This is wonderful! I was so sorry when there were no more stanzas.



  3. From Watertown

    What a lovely poetic tribute to the great Gian-Carlo Menotti you wrote!

    When, years and years ago (!), I used to play the organ at the Good Shepherd Church in Watertown, we produced a very simple, (and alas abridged) version of “Amahl”.

    The cast was all children, from 5-15. We had a wonderful time and I got to play the incredible ‘piano’ part and ‘direct’!

    The original Amahl opera, produced on TV in the 50’s, was my profound memory and inspiration. You probably heard it for the first time then.

    I also will long remember and appreciate Menotti’s “St. on Bleecker Street”! What a soul!

  4. You are amazing!!!


  5. DI, retired English teacher from Boston, said

    A beautiful and touching story! You are a gifted writer

  6. You should try to get this published before next year—maybe in some high-quality children’s magazine. It's really very good.

    Merry Christmas!


  7. Anna from the North said

    Your lovely verse inspired me to look up the picture of the night visitors. I couldn't find it. However, in my search I did find a wonderful old film on YouTube of the opera preceded by an introduction by Menotti himself. So, thank you for your poem and for the very enjoyable hour I spent watching and listening to Amahl & The Night Visitors.

  8. That was beautiful! Beautiful story, told with lovely descriptive wording.

    This got me curious about Gian Carlo Menotti. I found this neat quote from him about how he was inspired to write Amahl and the Night Visitors: (The Three Kings had always brought him gifts as he was growing up) Los Tres Reyes Magos bring gifts on Epiphany in Latin America.

    “But in 1951 I found myself in serious difficulty. I had been commissioned by the National Broadcasting Company to write an opera for television, with Christmas as deadline, and I simply didn't have one idea in my head. One November afternoon as I was walking rather gloomily through the rooms of the Metropolitan Museum, I chanced to stop in front of the Adoration of the Kings by Hieronymus Bosch, and as I was looking at it, suddenly I heard again, coming from the distant blue hills, the weird song of the Three Kings. I then realized they had come back to me and had brought me a gift.”

    Your friend Wendy in New Mexico,

  9. Lady J from Providence said

    Loved the Ahmal poem, especially as I had totally forgotten about that historic TV event. Thanks for this touching reminder.

  10. Thank you, very inspiriting.​


  11. Kindacuz said

    MAGNIFICENT, cousin! Great use of iambic pentameter. One branch of the family is descended from Shakespeare, you know. It never showed till you came along.

    Tell us more about the paintings ...

  12. Wow! That is quite an opus. How long did it take you to compose?

    your secret admirer

  13. DeeZack from Delmarva said

    Just beautiful! Thank you. Merry Xmas. We love you.

  14. Glad to see you are still up to your old tricks. We enjoyed the story. Happy New Year.

    Helga Frumda Hood

  15. I must commend you FT for ever reaching for and upholding the values that reside at the core of our better selves and pointing to to the core values op our Western culture and civilization that make the good in the world possible.

    Merry Christmas to you and yours!

  16. FreeThinke,

    You've produced a beautiful piece of art in the vein of O Henry's "The Gift" or Tolstoy's "What Men Live By," although those were prose.

    You should try to get that published in a publication for next Christmas.

    Merry Christmas!

  17. My dear FT ,Merry Christmas!

    I love this Christmas story!! Thank you very much.

    Your old friend, the Lily Maid of Astelot ;-)

  18. Thanks to everybody who left kind words.


  19. Enchanting.

    Merry Christmas and a Glorious New Year

  20. You brought tears to my eyes, FT. I can't remember the last time that happened. You know I pride myself on not being sentimental, but this really is a very moving tribute to Menotti. Thank you for yet another distinguished contribution. I hope you have a very Merry Christmas.

    ----------> Katharine Heartburn



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