Which Serves Us Best?
GRATITUDE? or CYNICISM?
As we approach Independence Day, please compare the words of “Hail, Columbia,” a once-popular patriotic song by Joseph Hopkinson, to the carryings in of the modern poet Alberto Terego, who came of age in the turbulent nineteen-sixties, and was obviously very much disenchanted with what he found.
Hail, Columbia, happy land!
Hail. ye heroes, heaven-born band,
Who fought and bled for freedom’s cause
Who fought and bled for freedom’s cause
And when the storm of war was done
Enjoyed the peace your valor won.
Let independence be our boast,
Ever mindful what it cost,
Ever grateful for the prize,
Let it’s altar reach the skies.
Firm, united let us be
Rallying ‘round our liberty,
As a band of brothers joined,
Peace and safety we shall find.
~ § ~
Do you prefer that, or would you rather subscribe to the following “modernist” view of American patriotism?
Bashing the Navy blue of sky
fierce color whirls and thrusts itself
in senseless patterns!
Loud noises crack and shrill
in mockery of cannon shot.
Open-Mouthed,
the “little folk”
sit and stare
forgetting each other
in vapid contentment.
Sedentary buttocks spread and sag
in canvas deck chairs.
Ice cream-sticky,
chocolate-covered children
gape and giggle ––
whine and whimper.
Rolled in a rough blanket
adolescent lovers
mockingly tempt fate,
And cling to the destruction
of their sweetness.
Crack! and the sky fills
with cruel white light.
Now, God can see
each family group
spread in shabby rows
Neatly spelling out ‘DEATH,”
punctuated with beer cans.
The flag has now flown
and dropped its burning stars
one by one to the ground.
No one listens as the band plays
the national anthem ––
out of tune.
~ § ~
Which sort of thinking suits your brand of patriotism? Which would make glad the hearts of of John Adams, Ben Franklin and the others glad they bothered to risk all for the love of Principle and Freedom? They are gone now.We have only their words left to guide us, but just as it was with them it's up to each of us to choose what course we will take. HINT: The paths of least resistance will never lead us toward Liberty and Justice, but only to Chains and Slavery.
As befits the present fragile, fearfully tenuous condition of the nation today we've having a SOMBER - CONTEMPLATIVE - SUPPLICATORY - and PRAYERFUL observance of INDEPENDENCE DAY WEEKEND here at FreeThinke's blogspot.
This does not mean expressions of joy and good humor are not welcome, but it does mean that mockery, cynical sneering and mindless, partisan BOILERPLATE –– from either side of the aisle –– will either be deleted or denounced.





























